This week try to expand/lengthen your writing comments. You can do this by adding more detail describing what you have read or predict what you think will happen next.
I read 'Once Upon A Time.' I read the story 'THE LITTLE TIN SOLDIER' and it is about a tinsmith who made a tin soldier and took it to the shop for someone to buy. here was another family and they had a little boy who was having a birthday and his maid bought him the set of little tin soldiers and the first one he pulled out was the soldier with only one leg because the tinsmith ran out of tin to build the other leg.The little boy had a brother and a sister. The brother got really jealous and at the end the brother threw the little soldier in the fire and then the wind blew the paper ballerina (who he was in love with) into the fire as well. Then the next morning the maid emptied the grate and among the ashes she found a lump of tin shaped as a heart,and beside it,burnt black as cole,lay the ballerina's sequin.
Then I got really angry because it cut off at the exact part i just typed. :(
Tonight I read to my family the same book and the same story but I practiced reading aloud to people and I also practiced my C.A.F.E strategy's. I made a few mistakes but I used most of my C.A.F.E strategy's to help me.
I found that it is hard to read very very loud and it is also hard to read with rattling cutlery and a lot of other loud annoying things.
I read about cottontail rabbits. I read about cottontail rabbits habbitat, diet, preditors and a few more things.
here's a few did you know questions: did you know that cottontail rabbits have 7 preditors? did you know that a male rabbit is called a buck, a female rabbit is called a doe and a baby rabbit is called a kit? Last one, did you know that cottontail rabbits are herbivores?
I am reading a book called Holly and Mac, It is about a man and a dog the dog Holly made a mess in the house and Mac the man yelled at the dog but at the end of the book the dog became a hero :)
tonight i read my charmed book i read about how Piper heared drum beats and saw flickering flames out side of the house they were staying at. so she decided to go out side and see what it was and what was out there. she went down to the end of the property where she seen heaps of people drssed in long red robes circled around something. Piper remembered this from when prue and her went to the meuseum of voodoo. Hallen had told Piper and Prue all about the different ceremonis and what the point of the ceremonie was.piper noticed that an allegator had slid out of the swamp, she was so scared she ran as fast as she could then she realized she was serounded by them. but she kept running, she was running and then she ran in to something someone. it was Randy, Piper felt really relived but the elligators were still there. Randy said some kind of wierd language to the elligator and then it just slithered away. Randy asked Piper why she was out side alone at this time of night, she told him that she heared some kind of drum beats and saw flickering fire. Piper told him all about how she saw the people dressed in the red robes, he told her that she is messing with some dangerous black magic and that she had to leave the house. piper ran back to the house and checked both Pheobes and Prues room to see if they were asleep they both were. Piper didn`t know what to do so she just went back into her room and tried to go backk to sleep. in the morning she ran into Prue and Pipers room and told them all what happend, and how she saw Randy out there. Pheobe recognised how Randy said that weired language to the alligator. because thats what he did to the snake. the three girls were really scared and they all knew that they had to leave the house by night fall.
I read 299 funny and hilarious jokes.I found a few jokes funny but not all of them here's a few jokes I read: Where does a butcher go to dance? A meat ball. mum: we're going to have a new baby! Dad:why,what's wrong with the old one? wWhy did people think Pluto was a planet? Because Mickey Mouse is a star. Do you cycle to school? No,I Recycle. What do you mean? I got my brothers old bike. What did the 0 say to the 8? Look's like your belt is to tight. who is the king of the classroom? The ruler.
I read lego idears it had bouts little bouts.
ReplyDeleteI read 'Once Upon A Time.'
ReplyDeleteI read the story 'THE LITTLE TIN SOLDIER' and it is about a tinsmith who made a tin soldier and took it to the shop for someone to buy. here was another family and they had a little boy who was having a birthday and his maid bought him the set of little tin soldiers and the first one he pulled out was the soldier with only one leg because the tinsmith ran out of tin to build the other leg.The little boy had a brother and a sister. The brother got really jealous and at the end the brother threw the little soldier in the fire and then the wind blew the paper ballerina (who he was in love with) into the fire as well. Then the next morning the maid emptied the grate and among the ashes she found a lump of tin shaped as a heart,and beside it,burnt black as cole,lay the ballerina's sequin.
Then I got really angry because it cut off at the exact part i just typed. :(
Last night I read The BFG. The book is getting interesting now. He really cares for Sophie.
ReplyDeleteMaybe i should read that, haha :)
DeleteTonight I read to my family the same book and the same story but I practiced reading aloud to people and I also practiced my C.A.F.E strategy's. I made a few mistakes but I used most of my C.A.F.E strategy's to help me.
ReplyDeleteI found that it is hard to read very very loud and it is also hard to read with rattling cutlery and a lot of other loud annoying things.
I read lego ideas it had a lego ideas. I am up to page 36
ReplyDeleteI read there's a rabbit in our class and I read about how they got the rabbit and a page of when it just arrived at their classroom door.
ReplyDeleteI read about cottontail rabbits.
ReplyDeleteI read about cottontail rabbits habbitat, diet, preditors and a few more things.
here's a few did you know questions: did you know that cottontail rabbits have 7 preditors?
did you know that a male rabbit is called a buck, a female rabbit is called a doe and a baby rabbit is called a kit? Last one, did you know that cottontail rabbits are herbivores?
I am reading a book called Holly and Mac, It is about a man and a dog the dog Holly made a mess in the house and Mac the man yelled at the dog but at the end of the book the dog became a hero :)
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DeleteI read lego ideas
ReplyDeleteI read a bit more of a diary of a wimpy kid dog days, It is really good, Its fun, Its Creative, Its like your the main character!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI read dork diarys it was about Brandon dating the girl
ReplyDeleteIt is a really good book it is skating sensation!!!!!!!!
how long have you been reading that for?
DeleteI read diary of a wimpy kid it was funny as
ReplyDeletetonight i read my charmed book i read about how Piper heared drum beats and saw flickering flames out side of the house they were staying at. so she decided to go out side and see what it was and what was out there. she went down to the end of the property where she seen heaps of people drssed in long red robes circled around something. Piper remembered this from when prue and her went to the meuseum of voodoo. Hallen had told Piper and Prue all about the different ceremonis and what the point of the ceremonie was.piper noticed that an allegator had slid out of the swamp, she was so scared she ran as fast as she could then she realized she was serounded by them. but she kept running, she was running and then she ran in to something someone. it was Randy, Piper felt really relived but the elligators were still there. Randy said some kind of wierd language to the elligator and then it just slithered away. Randy asked Piper why she was out side alone at this time of night, she told him that she heared some kind of drum beats and saw flickering fire. Piper told him all about how she saw the people dressed in the red robes, he told her that she is messing with some dangerous black magic and that she had to leave the house. piper ran back to the house and checked both Pheobes and Prues room to see if they were asleep they both were. Piper didn`t know what to do so she just went back into her room and tried to go backk to sleep. in the morning she ran into Prue and Pipers room and told them all what happend, and how she saw Randy out there. Pheobe recognised how Randy said that weired language to the alligator. because thats what he did to the snake. the three girls were really scared and they all knew that they had to leave the house by night fall.
ReplyDeleteCamryn was today or yesterday because that is a lot of writing to do for a grad 5 to do that much writing from Alanah.
DeleteI read 299 funny and hilarious jokes.I found a few jokes funny but not all of them here's a few jokes I read: Where does a butcher go to dance? A meat ball. mum: we're going to have a new baby! Dad:why,what's wrong with the old one? wWhy did people think Pluto was a planet? Because Mickey Mouse is a star. Do you cycle to school? No,I Recycle. What do you mean? I got my brothers old bike. What did the 0 say to the 8? Look's like your belt is to tight. who is the king of the classroom? The ruler.
ReplyDeleteIread 8000 awsome things it had dinosours how old thay are about there legs andposture
ReplyDeleteI read dork diary it's so funny
ReplyDeleteCharlotte where do you get dork diarys from
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